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the Critic returns
Posted By machievelli - 05/18/13
Another week, another review. Working on a piece I might be selling, but the basic premise is changing even as I write it. Part of the story has a man who eventually becomes a young woman but the reason this happens has changed until it becomes the wishes of all of those close to him all wishing for one thing, that he get his life back so he will live rather than just exist. Sort of a comment on people so hung up on the past that they let life pass them by.

When I am running well on a story, it's like jaywalking during rush hour.

Well enough about me, On to the reviews!

From Fanfiction.net we had HanuuEshe leading off with http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4103723/1/Sewers" target=_blank>Sewers then Jade Star with http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4104383/1/Reverse-Rebirth" target=_blank>ReverseRebirth

But best of the Week was won by Lady Tragic with http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3883810/1/Lost" target=_blank>Lost

Well back to the story I'm working on. If it gets much weirder, I am going to put it down like a rabid dog. Signing off...
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the Critic returns
Posted By machievelli - 05/11/13
To quote Han Solo from TESB, It's not my fault this time! The routers at my complex went down and I had to finish this late. It has started to get hot, yesterday we hit triple digits for the first time this year. I have been trying to get other stuff written, but I had two ideas pop up, one is something I can probably sell, the other is a joking piece based on the Anime Cat Planet Cuties where all of the Catians on the ship go into heat at the same time their version of a holodeck goes down...

One thing I did wrong; I gave the writing team of MaggOnasi and RevanBodyguard grief for using Queen Mother, only to discover that the term is actually the title of the overall ruler of the Cluster. I am rewriting that portion of my reviews, and will post the new ones later this week.

On with the reviews over at Fanfiction.net . The confrotation between Malak and Revan aboard the Leviathan is seen through Malak's eyes in Sarah1281's http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4079839/1/You-re-Not-Her" target=_blank>Youre Not Her Revan reveals her reason for falling in TsukasaFanBOF's http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083227/1/Revan-s-Heart" target=_blank>Revan'sHeart The Exile takes the first steps toward regaining his life in Adylinj's It Only Takes One Lady Tragic's Dark Lord Revan finally discovers how Carth felt in http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083841/1/Dead-Letters" target=_blank>DeadLetters and the Exile give a last gift to Atton to keep him from following her in Kian's http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4086827/1/Selfish" target=_blank>Selfish

Our best of the week is a tie. Princess Artemis shows us what happens when you ask the question in the wrong way with http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4083254/1/A-Dance-in-the-Trees" target=_blank>ADance in the Trees and Lady Tragic's second pick of the week scores a best with A Matter of Perspective and Degree

Well, retraction and paying and stories

Oh my.
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the Critic returns
Posted By machievelli - 05/05/13
Been cursing laptop developers all week. As I said last week, I offered to help a person download pictures of their website. It's easy, just hit the print screen button... Problem, modern laptops don't have print screen keys. So how do you do it? Finally talked to a guy at a computer store, and picked up a print screen software. So maybe I can do it now.

Also considering starting a webpage featuring all of my published work for e-copy. Now just have to find a PDF maker, and alter them for publication.

So on with the week.

Over at Fanfiction.net it was a tough race. Every one of the works to follow were good in a different way. Darkmoonvampire lead off with Revan's departure in KOTOR 3: The Real War EragonPeep's Exile is chosen by Kavar in Becoming An Apprentice To A Lightsabre Master VX-1482's Dark Lord Revan settles in with Lord of the Galaxy Firera's Exile wishes for a deeper relationship in If Only

But best of the week is a three-way tie. Epic Bad Ass gives us some bounty hunters reminiscent of Cowboy Bebop with Screwed, Moonmythology takes that romantic evening everyone envisons between Revan and Bastila, and gave us the riotous One Night and finally Lady Zenoka
scores with a story I wanted to read earlier Death of a Murderer

Back to the salt mines. Signing off...
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the Critic returns; finally
Posted By machievelli - 04/29/13
Running way late, but what else is new? Was just asked to help another writer convert his work from a website to book form for publication, and am awaiting a response from that. A friend who likes my work has been trying to find it via Amazon, but couldn't find it. I undertook a search and found that a used copy of my Original Gryphonrider is selling via Amazon for 338.57. Since it sold originally for 30 dollars via Publishamerica, my first thought was the same as four years ago, 'I must be dead'. That's because when an author or artist dies, their work jumps in price.

If I had a PDF maker, I'd be selling my works as E-books with that friend's help. But getting the money together (Try 449 for Acrobat or 80 for Nuance! is a killer. There are free versions out there, but I don't know if they're any good.

Enough of my grumbling, on to the reviews...

Coruscant Entertainment Center gave us Sithspecter with http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=212171" target=_blank>SquadronLegacy, Chapter 9; Rewrite which is in a three way tie for best of the Week

Then Fanfiction.net gave us sleepingthedayaway's Chocolate pudding
Snarryvader81's Shattered Dreamsand BananaLollipop17's Revan Was Gone

But the other two in that three way tie are Mettiz's http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4032336/1/He-and-She" target=_blank>Heand She and MisfitGirl13's The Next Mission

Got a reply and an e-mail for that person to see if we click and can work together. Don't know if I will make anything on it, but hey, I'm not paid for this either. Signing off...
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the Critic returns
Posted By machievelli - 04/19/13
Another week comes to a close, and I am catching up on the reviews that should have been posted months ago. Hopefully I will be up to date sometime in this century. Work is work, and someone asked me about a story of mine that has lain fallow for over a year. I'll try to get it running again soon, Adam.

Now on to our reviews. Over at Fanfiction.net we start off with HanuuEshe's final confrontation with the Jedi masters in In the Enclave followed by Arianadumbledore's reunion of Revan and the Exile in Prison Chat Both were good, but no Best this week, sorry.

Well, trying to restart that story. Signing off...
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the Critic returns
Posted By machievelli - 04/13/13
Another week, another review. With three different stories trying to be written at the same time, I got almost nothing done this last week because it's like listening to three conversations at the same time, and trying to keep up your end of the conversation(s). But we had a staff meeting in my head (As it were) and as soon as we have all come to a decision, I'll let you know.

So we begin our reviews with Fanfiction.net where Lord Darth Master give us a look at the past with Learning from the Past HelenaL is back with her KOTOR/Discworld crossover Non Timetis Messor

But best of the week went to the short and poignant http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4001724/1/Coward" target=_blank>Coward from Achalys.

So it's back to the salt mines. Signing off...
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the Critic returns
Posted By machievelli - 04/06/13
An interesting week. Working on three, count 'em, three stories all clamoring to be written. The temperature here has jumped from the fifties to the seventies and eighties, which is just a taste of the triple digits of next month or the summer.

Finally finished my reviews and belatedly, I am ignoring kotorfanmedia to post those that belong on fanfiction, so without further ado...

Fanfiction.net gave us the poignant work of Sharinganavenger with http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3938728/1/Cold-Light" target=_blank>ColdLight Scious who used another handle on kotofanmedia gives us http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3715850/1/Of-Droids-Meatbags-The-Tale-of-HK47" target=_blank>OfDroids & Meatbags: The Tale of HK47

And our best was a tie this week with HanuuEshe's Five Ways Carth and Revan Weren't Reunited and the return of Revan's split personality with The Wonderful Adventures of a Moron

Since I have a coffee pot again, I'm considering another cup. So signing off...
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the Critic returns
Posted By machievelli - 03/30/13
Another week, thanks to Easter this week and next week are confused. Two different stories are arguing about who gets written first with a third fallow one starting to nudge me again. Now I just have to figure which one is more important.

But let's see what I have for you this week.

Again kotorfanmedia is down, maybe hors de combat. But we still have Fanfiction.net to rely on. We start with Emperor Sunny and a deaf Sith in The Dark Path Athena Solaris with a Kamino Exile in Reticent Savior Topgallant with Malak finally falling in http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3938725/1/Faithless" target=_blank>Faithless

My best of the Week however is split between three stories by two authors. The riotous
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3094035/1/Chats-with-Carth" target=_blank>Chatswith Carth by
The Penguin Squad, and Daemonetta19 with both On Rakatan and
Dreamscapes.

Since I have the next three days off, I am going to have drink, then a quiet discussion with my muse to see who gets written first. Signing off...
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the Critic returns
Posted By machievelli - 03/24/13
Another week. A story that has lain fallow for months suddenly wants to be written again, and is flowing well.

So let's see what I have for youy...

Fanfiction.net starts off with Warden Whitetree and Duel on Duxn Excerpt followed by HanuuEshe's
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3883793/1/Choices" target=_blank>Choices

But best of the week is split between Lossefalme's http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2581796/1/Betrayed" target=_blank>Betrayed and Digitalmetal's
SWG: Test of Fate

Researching all of the fictional ways magic is done trying to create a sort of theory of magical relativity Wish me luck. Signing off...
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the Critic returns
Posted By machievelli - 03/16/13
An interesting week; the weather is like spring a little early, but is supposed to be cold as hell in the next week or so. A story I wrote entitled The Squad is nudging me to start it up again by trying to make it a comedy instead of a stark drama.

Well enough about me, let's see what I have for you this week

At Coruscant Entertainment Center Chevron 7 locke gave us the comedic http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=211987" target=_blank>Khemloves Killiks

Over at Fanfiction.net DyrraDegan starts us off with Primal, Emalin
gets a reprise pick for Return of the Gizka and Red Ace shows a descent into the dark with Decisions of a Dangerous Mind

But with the two sides of a coin, our Best were given to
Imbroglio
CarnivorousPineapple
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3865219/1/Coward" target=_blank>Coward
DhtrofIsis

So back to work on the story...
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the Critic returns
Posted By machievelli - 03/09/13
Another week, and I have yet another gripe. For those of you who watch television, you will have seen the ones talking about post offices being closed and service on Saturday, and direct delivery in some cases being curtailed. This is due to a bill passed back in 2006 where someone noticed a fact most of you don't know...

When it comes to wasting money, the Post Office is the only branch of the Federal government where they have always operated in the black, meaning that while they might need to borrow at the start of the year, they always paid that back by years end. No other branch can say that.

So back in 2006, someone came up with the idea of looting the post office for their own pet projects; projects that run over on their funds, and in some cases, don't even have to explain their shortfalls to us. Now, it's come time as the old saying goes to pay the piper, and they expect us to pay for it by accepting reduced services.

The last time the post office reduced service like this was back in the first decade of the 20th century. After the advent of the telephone, the post office reduced their services. They went from four deliveries a day to only one. Of course then it was a logical step; why spend a whole 12-14 hours waiting for say an invitation to a party that night to be delivered across town for the reply?

It makes all the talk about charging us for e-mails more sinister.

When you see the ad, write down the link, and tell congress where to stick it; sideways, without lube.

All right, soap box put away, here is what I have for you this week.

Coruscant Entertainment Center is in the list with JasraLantill's return with [Url= http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=21197[/url]TOR: Smuggler's Trial Run [/url]

Over at Fanfiction.net Daemonette19's
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3822370/1/Awakening" target=_blank>Awakening followed by GirlyXXXGeek's The Pregnancy Test, Lorelei Jane's http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3851655/1/Farewell-My-Lady" target=_blank>FarewellMy Lady
and our best of the week with Indigirl450's http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3839230/1/Light-in-the-Dark" target=_blank>Lightin the Dark

Well weather here has to to hell yet again. If I were a little girl I might sing 'The Sun'll come out'...

Just kidding. Signing off...
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