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Editors' Choice for 2006 Fan Fiction


| 2006 Reader's Choice for Best Full-length Fiction |
| 2006 Reader's Choice for Best Short Fiction |



Editors' Choice for 2006 Full-length Fan Fiction

machievelli and I collaborated to choose these, and I've written the reviews here by combining some of his original reviews in The Critic's 2 Cents with my comments. These fics are listed in no particular order—we enjoyed all of these and hope you will, too. --Jae Onasi

Star Wars: Victim of Betrayal by Sabretooth
Captain Wefive is tasked with executing Order 66. When thing don't go as planned, he is accused of betraying the Empire. A well-written story from a clone Captain's point of view. It has plenty of action and some unexpected plot twists.

Betrayal and Retribution series by stingerhs (link is to Perceived Reality, the first in the series)
Two Padawans, Jeez and Miranda, are caught up in the events leading up to the Clone Wars. Machievelli and I both commented on how well stingerhs captured the politics. He wove these into the action sequences while touching on the difficulties of forbidden love among Jedi. That's not an easy task, and stingerhs handled all the different plot threads well.

Mace Windu: Jedi Master Reborn by RC1162
An action-filled adventure detailing what happens to Mace Windu when he falls out of the broken window after battling Palpatine and Anakin. It moves well and there's plenty of exciting action scenes.

An Inverse of Stars: Part Three by PazaakPrincess
A female Revan has been kidnapped, and Canderous and Carth have to find her. It's best to read the entire series, though Part 3 can be read as a standalone story. The descriptions of the Inversari are particularly rich, and the characterization of Canderous and Carth are well done.

Path of Betrayal by Rob Qel-Droma
A young man is sent to spy on the Mandalorians. The dialog is solid, and the intrigue is fascinating. We just wish he'd post more!

The Adventures of Jolee Bindo by Jae Onasi
machievelli says: As the critic at this pop stand, I have been asked to write a more comprehensive review of this work for our best of 06. Go figure. All right, here goes. The story is a well-told tale as defined by Robert Louis Stevenson. If you do not know what that means, think of it as your teacher giving you a homework assignment. Look it up. As the local grand inquisitor of the Canon for this site, I can honestly say that it does what all of us should be doing, which is expanding the canon without ripping the fabric of our shared universe to shreds. Some throw it away because they refuse to allow its strictures, but those are the ones I ding most. I have never dinged Jae on this, though like any mean old man, I look forward to the day...

Star Wars: The Beginning by Machievelli
Jae Onasi says: Where did the Jedi begin? How did hyperspace travel start? Machievelli addresses the origins of the things that make Star Wars what it is, and does it well. The story is a fine read with a number of plots and sub-plots that keep the story fascinating, all the while making the characters very real with complex feelings and experiences. He mixes the serious with the humorous skillfully, and you absolutely don't want to miss what the Mandalorian boys do to the pleasure yacht. I told mach in SW: Republic Dawn, the sequel, that his stories are some of the few for which I'd stay up reading until the wee hours of the morning.

The True Teachings series by igyman (link is to Part 1 in the series)
A galaxy-spanning story in which a half-human, half-Vong man learns to wield dark powers. Igyman includes a number of plots and sub-plots that bring the story to life, and the main characters are characterized well.

Darth Sion: A Legacy of Pain by DarthSion101
There are precious few stories focused on Darth Sion, and even fewer that characterize a Sith Lord with the depth and care with which DarthSion101 portrayed him. This is an interesting look at the events in The Sith Lords from Sion's point of view.

Star Wars: Heart of the Guardian by JediMaster12
This story spans decades and planets and follows the development of JC into a young Jedi forced to take on the mantle of protecting his people by accepting his role as Kirabaros. She has the ability to create an entire culture and bring it to life with all the tiny little details that mark a people, which, trust me, is very difficult to do well. It kept both of us interested and was an enjoyable read.

Editors' Choice for 2006 Short Fan Fiction

We had a much harder time limiting ourselves to just ten stories in the short fanfiction category. In the end, we decided that twelve was OK after all. As with the full-length fic choices, these are in no particular order, and I again combined my comments with the critiques machievelli had done earlier in the year. --Jae Onasi

Misplaced Trust by The Doctor
Not very many pieces explore the relationship between Saul Karath and Carth Onasi. This one tells the story of Saul's offer for Carth to join him. The emotions are well portrayed, the mood is excellent, and the final lines in the piece are chilling.

The Gremlins by Mace MacLeod
Jae says: I can't possibly say it better than machievelli, except to add that I laughed so hard in some spots my eyes were watering. Machievelli says: During the Imperial Era, a couple of boys have some fun with Imperial ship design. A well written little piece, and it would explain a lot about the tendency to have deep pits that seem to have no purpose. I have to agree with him about form following function, though an Ohio class submarine does have enough room for a 60 by 60 by 80 ballroom if you remove the missile deck. But that would interfere with the golf course...

The Lost of the Jedi by Dark_Lady
An inept Jedi has to save a child from a tunnel infested with killer spiders. The story is well done, and the punchline was perfect.

Master's Night Out by JasraLantill
Ever wonder what Master Jedi do on their evenings off from training? As machievelli noted, the interplay between the masters is what you'd expect from old friends commiserating about their dunderhead students. The creative way the Masters trained their eager students the 'morning after' was particularly rich.

DARTH VADER in "Heads Will Roll!" by Tysyacha
Put any drinks down before you start reading this one. machievelli and I both laughed hard—Tysyacha should have to pay a humor tax for causing sore stomach muscles.

A Box of Lies by JediMaster12
A sweet piece where Atton and the Exile finally put aside lies and tell each other how they really feel. JM12 captures their personalities well.

Pookie by Jae Onasi
machievelli says: So how did we end up with a Gizka? The style is excellent, the byplay between characters excellent, and the premise not only plausible, but fun. An excellent read. I'll add that I had a lot of fun making up the Czerka memo.

Ebon Hawk Pranksters by CountVerilucus
Both of us were amused by this little story of the Ebon Hawk crew pulling pranks on the rather dour Bastila. As machievelli says, "the set up for the prank was outstanding, and using HK as the straight man was choice."

Freefall by igyman
A young Sith fights against fate. The author does a good job with the scenes, and I agree when machievelli says that the ending was exquisite.

Love and Tranquility by Mr_BFA
Revan makes a fateful decision on Dantooine in this short story set between Kotor and TSL. Both of us thought it was a short but poignant piece.

Shortie Fics! by ForceFightWMe12
There are several stories in this thread. The first details a young Revan's attempt to find a cure for his friend Bastila's illness. FFWM12 captures Revan's determination at poring through the archives to find the problem and then his frantic attempts to hide from Atris in the library late at night. The little details like the description of the night storm enhance this well-done short story.

Final Breath by Ambrose
This story gives us a view of the fight in the Telos academy between Brianna and her sisters, and Exile and Atris. It's done in a smooth, crisp style, and the ending is at once tragic and heartwarming.

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